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It is important that
children
 learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.
Punishment
 is necessary to help them learn
this
 distinction.To what extent do you agree or disagree with
this
 opinion what sort of
punishment
 should
parents
 and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to
children
?
This
 essay agrees that proper discipline via
punishment
 should be instilled in
children
 so they know there are consequences to their actions and methods used to cease unwarranted behaviour should be limited to restricting access to desirable activities rather than being physically punished.
Children
 should be taught by their teachers and
parents
 about the results of specific
activities
Add a comma
,activities
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 they involve in
school
 and society.It should be completely ascertained that every pursuit that breaks rules set by society or
school
 administration is strictly implemented and if any rules will be broken by anyone they are liable to be punished by authority.
Parents
 have a responsibility to punish their
child
Fix the agreement mistake
children
show examples
 to help them become responsible citizens in the future.
For example
, a
school
 that strictly implements its dress code and discipline in classes has fewer students breaking laws in the outer world.
However
,
punishment
 should never be violent because it teaches the
child
 that the answer to a problem is to beat someone,resulting in a young person becoming prone to violence.A better
punishment
 is to take away something the
child
 treasures,
such
 as their favourite toy or TV show or stop them from seeing their best friend.
This
 allows the
child
 time to think about what they did and learn from the experience without physical abuse.
For instance
,most violent offenders in British prisons experienced physical
punishment
 as
children
, demonstrating that the victim can often become the perpetrator. In conclusion,it utmost necessary for
children
 to be disciplined by
parents
 and
school
 so they become civilised,
however
,
this
 should be non-violent.The best way to punish a
child
 is by depriving something they have a strong attachment to.
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