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Book experience or life experience which one is better and why? Explain in 150 words ?

#book #life
Book
experience
 and
life
experience
 both play a vital role in everybody's
life
.
According to
 my point of view,
life
experience
 is far better as compared to the book
experience
. I will explain my reasons behind
this
 phenomenon in the upcoming paragraphs
along with
the
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 valid conclusion. To commence with, the first and foremost reason behind
this
 approach is that why
life
experience
 is better than book
experience
 because individuals will definitely learn some important lessons
with
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 their mistakes and they will obviously ensure that it should not happen again.
On the contrary
, in
this
 modern epoch, folks do not have much time to spend their time on reading
the
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books
, they
always
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 busy
in
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 their hectic schedule.
Then
 how it is possible for individuals to learn and gain something if they do not utilize their time on reading
.
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Moreover
,
the
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another appropriate
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reason
 is that it is not mandatory that the data is accurate
taht
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that
 is given in the
books
 because sometimes authors write illogical things just to increase the sales of their
books
. In conclusion, I reiterate that folks should definitely learn something new from their daily experiences
as
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 comparison with the
books
.
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