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In the past, people used to get information from books. These days more and more people get it from the internet. Give reasons for your opinion and include any relevant examples.

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There is an ever-increasing use of
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people
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 are getting
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information
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 from the
internet
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instead
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 of using
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the
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book
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books
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.It is often argued that is a positive development,whilst
other
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others
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 disagree and think it will lead to adverse ramifications.
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websites is more
worthy
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. The
internet
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 has provided students with access to more
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 than ever before.
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, it is a
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 process
as well as
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easy
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 method to get
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.Do not need to carry large
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 every single time if we have
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 everything present
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 that mobile.
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, it helps to save money.Because
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in
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 the net everything is available for free and we can download it
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 need to buy anything.It is
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 agreed that
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 is a very worthwhile tool for education.Wikipedia is a primary example, where students can get any type of
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 quickly and easily.
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, many people disagree and feel that
technology
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 deprives old culture.In earlier days people used
books
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 to get
data
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.But,it is hard nowadays to use
books
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.Because
,
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 the cost of
books
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too
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 high and we have to search the
data
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 by turning the pages it is time taking process.
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,
books
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 for study
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 a lot of effects
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 from
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.So, individuals prefer
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the internet
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internet
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than
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books
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.
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,
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 are disadvantages
of
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 using smartphones for
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 but it outweighs the advantages. In conclusion,
while
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 the benefits of
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, particularly the
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internet
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, allow students to tap into limitless sources of
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,
but
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using
books
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 for study purposes has more demerits than using the
internet
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.

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