You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about a problem I had with my reservation at your hotel Holiday Inn in Niagara Falls, Ontario. When I arrived at the hotel and reached the front desk, I was shocked to know that my room reservation is not in the books. The room I wanted to spend the night in, was facing the well-known Niagara Falls of Canada.

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, I had to stay in a smaller room with a park view.

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the receptionist was professional and he understood my problem, and he even offered me a 50% discount bonus to make me feel better, which I accepted,

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does not compensate me for the error that had happened from your end.

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, I suggest you make sure that the online booking website is up to date and does not give false data.

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, customers shall know which suite is reserved and which is not.

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, the booking function on the website should be fixed because, clearly it does not work.

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, I recommend that you activate the phone reservation option. I looking forward to hearing for a solution has been made as I do spend every year's Spring at your hotel. Yours faithfully, John Walker

muhammedalkawazSat Jun 17 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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209 words

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You had a problem while staying at a hotel and the receptionist was very helpful. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter, – describe the problem that you had – explain how the receptionist helped you – suggest ways to prevent the problem from happening again.

It was predicted that with the development of technology, people in the 21st century would have much more free time than past. To what extent has this prediction come true?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global escaled while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.