The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in two different years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The two

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charts provide data about how a group aged, 18 to 25

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old, consumed

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shows in the

years

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2009 and 2019 in Canada. The

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charts are divided into 6 different categories; each one is a device to consume

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content. As can be observed in the first

pie

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chart, in the year 2009 the most popular device used by people in Canada to watch television is the conventional

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, with 34% of the total amount.

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, 10

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later, in 2019, as the second

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chart illustrates,

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percentage dropped drastically. Just 4% of the age group use traditional television to consume

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programs.

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, the conventional

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goes from the most used device to the most unpopular one, in the interval of 10

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that, we can

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see how the use of flat-screen

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and tablet to watch

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has increased over the

years

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: from 8% to 27% and from 5% to 19% respectively.

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, the second chart shows the use of flat-screen

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and mobile phone became a trend among younger people to consume

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content.

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