The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies
In the
frozen Change preposition
The
fish
pie, it
mainly consisted of Correct pronoun usage
apply
fish
, potato, peas, and sauce. The package is made ready for the consumer to reheat conveniently in the microwave with its microwaveable container. The production line is made up of many steps
First,
the process
of potato preparation is longer than that of the salmon. Within 30 days, the potatoes are delivered to the factory, then
cleaned and peeled as the skin
goes to the waste disposal bin. After the process
of peeling it is sliced and boiled. When the boiling process
is over it gets chilled and will be stored until it is used.
Second,
is the salmon filets and unlike the potatoes the meat of the fish
has to be processed within 12 hours or else the fish
would likely go bad. When it gets delivered it is seasoned with salt and lemon. After seasoning the filets get put in a steam oven, then
undergo the tedious process
of skin
and bone removal. The skin
and bones like the potato skin
also
goes
to the waste disposal bin. After it goes through that Change the verb form
go
process
it is then
inspected to check for leftover bones.
Lastly
, the peas and sauce get prepared, and the stored potatoes with the rest of the ingredients gets
packaged and wrapped into microwaveable containers. Change the verb form
get
Then
it is freezed
and stored in boxes to get dispatched to stores.Correct your spelling
frozen
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