The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies

The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies
In the
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frozen
fish
pie,
it
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mainly consisted of
fish
, potato, peas, and sauce. The package is made ready for the consumer to reheat conveniently in the microwave with its microwaveable container. The production line is made up of many steps
First,
the
process
of potato preparation is longer than that of the salmon. Within 30 days, the potatoes are delivered to the factory,
then
cleaned and peeled as the
skin
goes to the waste disposal bin. After the
process
of peeling it is sliced and boiled. When the boiling
process
is over it gets chilled and will be stored until it is used.
Second,
is the salmon filets and unlike the potatoes the meat of the
fish
has to be processed within 12 hours or else the
fish
would likely go bad. When it gets delivered it is seasoned with salt and lemon. After seasoning the filets get put in a steam oven,
then
undergo the tedious
process
of
skin
and bone removal. The
skin
and bones like the potato
skin
also
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to the waste disposal bin. After it goes through that
process
it is
then
inspected to check for leftover bones.
Lastly
, the peas and sauce get prepared, and the stored potatoes with the rest of the ingredients
gets
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packaged and wrapped into microwaveable containers.
Then
it is
freezed
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and stored in boxes to get dispatched to stores.
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