The diagrams below give information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies

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frozen

fish

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pie,

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mainly consisted of

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, potato, peas, and sauce. The package is made ready for the consumer to reheat conveniently in the microwave with its microwaveable container. The production line is made up of many steps

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of potato preparation is longer than that of the salmon. Within 30 days, the potatoes are delivered to the factory,

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cleaned and peeled as the

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goes to the waste disposal bin. After the

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of peeling it is sliced and boiled. When the boiling

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is over it gets chilled and will be stored until it is used.

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is the salmon filets and unlike the potatoes the meat of the

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has to be processed within 12 hours or else the

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would likely go bad. When it gets delivered it is seasoned with salt and lemon. After seasoning the filets get put in a steam oven,

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undergo the tedious

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of

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and bone removal. The

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and bones like the potato

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to the waste disposal bin. After it goes through that

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it is

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inspected to check for leftover bones.

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, the peas and sauce get prepared, and the stored potatoes with the rest of the ingredients

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packaged and wrapped into microwaveable containers.

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it is

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and stored in boxes to get dispatched to stores.