Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

An individual who strives to make an impact

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a global problem

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would very likely fail as their efforts are nothing but grains of sand.

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and large

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will always make a difference. What

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do

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have to

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in the first place in order to improve the

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? They would need a strong and unmoving will to commit to

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acts. And

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, as in

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modern world

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what gives

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the

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to do certain actions. Given that big

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are able to influence various aspects of our lives, it is safe to assume that only big

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and

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can make a difference. As mere

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with no

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in hand can do next to nothing to

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something.

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and big

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if willing to

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the

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for the better, will do a decent job doing so. As they have

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influence over the public and

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wealth to perform any solution, even the most costly ones, to improve the

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. Whilst

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can only rely on themselves spreading the word of mouth and

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small actions to pressure the parties with higher authorities to take action. Sadly, despite the overwhelming

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that big

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and the government have over their country, it is tricky to say that they will do anything at all to cause a difference to the

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.

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, they are blinded by greed seeing the

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financial benefits that destroying the

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gives, but not the

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benefits

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when sustaining the

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. But with the rising number of

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gaining knowledge about

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worldwide problem, more and more

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are starting to fight back and raise their voices for our

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. Over a short span of time, we are expected to see an accumulation of

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standing up for the

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which could go up to numbers exceeding millions and hundreds of millions of

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, which in turn could effectively pressure the

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and big

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to lift their fingers and act. In short,

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it is obvious that big

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and the government have the

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to

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the world for the better place, but did not do so. It is up to the

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to stay together and become an unmoving force, persuading the big

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and the government to

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the

environment

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for the better, helping humanity to have a sustainable future.