Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other countries have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Due to
globalization and
Industralization
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Industrialisation
a lot of
daliy
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daily
basic
good
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were exported from overseas
through
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long miles. There are many basic needs which were accomplished by
forigen
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foreign
countries, like bread, tomatoes, grains etc. There are many advantages and disadvantages of transporting
goods
over a long distance. In my opinion, the pros outweigh the cons. On the positive side, Transporting
goods
from different
countires
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countries
are
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is
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beneficial for the economy and it
enhace
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enhance
the
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world-wide
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worldwide
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trade across the globe. Individuals can taste
of
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many vegetables and fruits from across the globe, for an instance in the 90s era kiwi
were
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barely found in the part of
india
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India
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while
now
india
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India
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is became
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the
largerst
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largest
consumer of the new-zeland
furits
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fruits
especially kiwi, it can
seen
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in every county of the country. India and
new-zealand
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New Zealand
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became the largest exporters of
furits
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fruits
and
vegetable
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vegetables
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and it helps them to make good international
realtion
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relation
relations
.
Secondly
, many people start up the small scale business and
able
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to contribute
the
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economy,
while
exchange
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the exchange
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of
the
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goods
, it
help
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two
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countries
countires
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countries
to exchange their culture and their
goods
,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global economy
  • Consumer choice
  • Economic benefits
  • Job creation
  • Gross Domestic Product (GDP)
  • Infrastructure
  • Standard of living
  • Cost efficiencies
  • Raw materials
  • Production processes
  • Specialization
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon emissions
  • Pollution
  • Supply chain disruptions
  • Local industries
  • Cultural dilution
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