Nowaday, more and more people commit crimes. What are causes and solutions?

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, more and more

people

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commit

crimes

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enough

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income and

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necessary

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grovenment

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investigate the root cause of issues. crime

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illegal

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them for money.

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foreign

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crimes

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lower

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problem solving

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to reduce

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govenment

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fix.

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mention

people

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survive their life. So

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necessary

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without crime. So

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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254 words

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Nowaday, more and more people commit crimes. What are causes and solutions?

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In many developing countries today, air pollution is a major issue. What are causes and could be taken to prevent this problem in the future?

Because of the global economy, many goods including what we use as daily basics produced by other counties have to be transported for a long distance. To what extent do the advantages oufweigh the disadvantages?

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