Nowaday, more and more people commit crimes. What are causes and solutions?

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, more and more
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income and
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necessary
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investigate the root cause of issues. crime
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them for money.
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future.
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to reduce
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govenment
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and
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fix.
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mention
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survive their life. So
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the govenment
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govenment
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government
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family condition.
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when
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ratio
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travel
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summarize
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government
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our
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thing
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hope our
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without crime. So
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safety
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on
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official
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base in the future.
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