The chart below shows the expenditure on three categories among different age groups of residents in the UK in 2004.
The bar chart showcases how much each of the three categories contributed to the total expenses of Britons in different youth groups.
It is clear that
in 2004, food and drink Linking Words
along with
entertainment are what people tend to spend on when they get older, Linking Words
however
, the pattern for restaurants and hotels appears to be distinctive.
It can be noted that most expenditure of young adults under the maturity of 30 is on accommodation and eating out, Linking Words
while
for the rest the tendency is slightly lower. The figures seemed to be almost 15 and just over five per cent respectively. Restaurants with hotels accounted for more than ten per cent of the total cost of residents over 30 but under 60, and for over sixty years old habitats the proportion of the category has become inconsiderable.
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According to
the illustration, British individuals over the old age of thirty spent more than 10%, and the more life is, the more the portion of total spending is. Linking Words
However
, the expenses of Britons who are between 61 and 75 on entertainment appeared to be approximately twenty-three per cent which is considerably more than the percentage of the rest age groups.Linking Words
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