The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two bar charts compare and contrast the data on what kind of work both UK graduate and postgraduate
students
choose to do after leaving the university, excluding full-time jobs in 2008.
The majority of UK graduates choose to continue studying Use synonyms
instead
of working. Linking Words
Similarly
, the same happens in the path of the UK postgraduates as well. Meanwhile, voluntary work is the least favourite among both groups of Linking Words
students
.
In 2008, both graduate and postgraduate Use synonyms
students
were going for Use synonyms
further
study, accounting for 29,665 and 2,725 Linking Words
students
respectively. Use synonyms
However
, there is a big difference between Linking Words
further
study and voluntary work as the number of Linking Words
students
who chose Use synonyms
this
path was considerably low, with 3,500 graduates and 345 postgraduate Linking Words
students
.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the number of graduate Linking Words
students
who worked part-time and were unemployed in 2008 showed a slight difference between the numbers which accounted for 17,735 Use synonyms
in
part-time and 16,235 in unemployment. Change preposition
apply
Also
, the number of graduates who were unemployed was almost ten times greater than postgraduate Linking Words
students
in 2008.Use synonyms
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