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The table below give information about sales of Fair trade labeled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The table below give information about sales of Fair trade labeled coffee and banana in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The tables compare the number of coffees and bananas sold by Fairtrade company in five distinct European countries from 1999 to 2014.
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, almost the sales of bananas and coffees increased with a couple of exceptions. Both commodities sold in the UK increased significantly in the span of 5 years. They rose from 1.5
million
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euros
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 to 20
million
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euros
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 and 15
million
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euros
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 to 47
million
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euros
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 respectively for
coffee
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 and
banana
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. Moving on to the
next,
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there is a rise in
coffee
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 and
banana
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 sold in Switzerland. The number of sales of
coffee
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 in Switzerland rise two times from 3
million
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euros
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 to 6
million
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 between 1999 and 2014
whereas
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 the
banana
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 increased nearly six times from 1
million
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euros
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 to 5.5
million
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euros
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. The
coffee
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 sold in Denmark increase
as well as
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 the
banana
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. The number of
coffee
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 sold in Denmark rose slightly from 1.8
million
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euros
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 to 2
million
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euros
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while
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 the
banana
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 sold in Denmark has a greater increment which is 0.6
million
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euros
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 to 4
million
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euros
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. There are
also
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 two outliers which are the
banana
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 sold in Belgium and the amount of
coffee
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 sold in Sweden. Both of them decreased moderately from 1999 to 2014.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, euros, coffee, banana with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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