The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the results of surveys in one African country asking teenagers the main reasons for using their phones between 2016 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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pie chart shows the outcome of a survey conducted on teenagers in an African country over a period of four years. In the first two years, the result shows most teenagers spent more than half of their day between social media platforms, as 50% of the total was spent on social networks and almost 25% on emails.
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the graph, users did not use their smartphones to increase their photographic insane, the usage of the camera was at a constant low level at 15%.
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that, it seems that they do not receive or make calls more often, they settle for messages. Compared to the
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years, their social activities were almost the same around 75%, but they gained an interest in digital
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and photography. I suppose that's what caused the number of phone calls to decrease to 5% by the end of the year. In
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whole period,
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activities were nearly the same, which implicates a pattern in human life in general.
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