National costume or traditional wears of a particular country are an important part of the culture of that country, but with globalisation of cultures and other exchanges taking place, now they seem to be losing importance. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

India is diversity country, Here living

people

from different cultures, Domestic clothes or cultural apparel

wearing

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a particular nation is a crucial part of the

culture

of that state, But with the globalisation of traditions and other trading taking place and losing our nation's emotions and beliefs. I agree with

this

notion so will discuss it in detail.

To begin

with,

This

is the modern era

people

are following

western

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culture

and

day

by

day

attract

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and obsessed with the foreign

culture

they lost behind the moral values of our

culture

and tradition.

Moreover

, youngsters are following social media and are very obsessed with it, So they saw their

culture

and watch Hollywood

culture

in movies their

culture

very

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bad effects on Indian

people

without knowing about the side effects they follow their

culture

. But when South Indian

people

did not follow other getups because they respect their

culture

as well as

they were going anywhere they always wore lungi and kurta and women wear sarees.

Additionally

, In

this

fast ,life

people

think very

advance

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and live modern

lifestyle

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lifestyles

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especially in Delhi, Mumbai, Goa and West Bengals Individuals wear mostly Western clothes,

Although

, many companies allow in their offices only formal uniforms

such

as pants and shirts for both

gender

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.

Nevertheless

, Citizens lost the moral values of their

culture

they did not care about

that is

a very bad effect on the globalisation of cultural emotions and beliefs. But, If I talk about the Muslim community they follow their god's rule they wear pathani suits and their women wear a burkha when they were going anywhere. Because Some

people

think that, Rape

case

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increasing in the nation

day

by

day

there is

the

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reason that women wear short clothes. In conclusion, globalisation is affected by Western cultures so

people

get preference

their

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own

culture

and they get the value of morals, emotions, beliefs, and region. So that we did not lose our

culture

.