The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The table above shows data regarding
sales
of coffee
and bananas
in five different countries in the years 1999 and 2004. Based on the information provided, it is evident that sales
of coffee
in all countries increased during five years period, meanwhile
Add a comma
,meanwhile
sales
of bananas
only decreased in Belgium and Sweden.
Revenue from the coffee
and bananas
market in the UK increase significantly and constitutes the largest compared to other countries, started
at $1,5 Wrong verb form
starting
million
in 1999 and soared
to $20 Wrong verb form
soaring
million
in 2004 for coffee
and $32 million
for bananas
. In Switzerland, the sales
of those items were the second largest increase, with amounts of $3 million
and $4,5 million
respectively, and the least for sales
of coffee
increased was in Sweden and Denmark with for
only $0,2 Change preposition
apply
million
each.
On the other hand
, sales
of bananas
in Denmark increased by $3,4 million
in 2005 than previous
period or more than 500%. Correct article usage
the previous
By contrast
, the sales
of this
fruit in Belgium and Canada fell to $1 million
and $0,9 million
, accounted
for $0,8 Wrong verb form
accounting
million
and $1,1 million
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