The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
The table above shows data regarding
sales
of
coffee
and
bananas
in five different countries in the years 1999 and 2004. Based on the information provided, it is evident that
sales
of
coffee
in all countries increased during five years period,
meanwhile
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sales
of
bananas
only decreased in Belgium and Sweden. Revenue from the
coffee
and
bananas
market in the UK increase significantly and constitutes the largest compared to other countries,
started
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starting
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at $1,5
million
in 1999 and
soared
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soaring
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to $20
million
in 2004 for
coffee
and $32
million
for
bananas
. In Switzerland, the
sales
of those items were the second largest increase, with amounts of $3
million
and $4,5
million
respectively, and the least for
sales
of
coffee
increased was in Sweden and Denmark with
for
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only $0,2
million
each.
On the other hand
,
sales
of
bananas
in Denmark increased by $3,4
million
in 2005 than
previous
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the previous
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period or more than 500%.
By contrast
, the
sales
of
this
fruit in Belgium and Canada fell to $1
million
and $0,9
million
,
accounted
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accounting
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for $0,8
million
and $1,1
million
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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