The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, make comparisons where relevant.
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The table above shows data regarding
sales
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of
coffee
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and
bananas
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in five different countries in the years 1999 and 2004. Based on the information provided, it is evident that
sales
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of
coffee
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in all countries increased during five years period,
meanwhile
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sales
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of
bananas
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only decreased in Belgium and Sweden. Revenue from the
coffee
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and
bananas
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market in the UK increase significantly and constitutes the largest compared to other countries,
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at $1,5
million
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in 1999 and
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to $20
million
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in 2004 for
coffee
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and $32
million
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for
bananas
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. In Switzerland, the
sales
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of those items were the second largest increase, with amounts of $3
million
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and $4,5
million
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respectively, and the least for
sales
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of
coffee
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increased was in Sweden and Denmark with
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only $0,2
million
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each.
On the other hand
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,
sales
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of
bananas
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in Denmark increased by $3,4
million
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in 2005 than
previous
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period or more than 500%.
By contrast
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, the
sales
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of
this
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fruit in Belgium and Canada fell to $1
million
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and $0,9
million
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,
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for $0,8
million
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and $1,1
million
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee, bananas, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • sales figures
  • percentage increase/decrease
  • European countries
  • sales volume
  • notable trend
  • exponential growth
  • moderate rise
  • marked decline
  • comparative analysis
  • economic factors
  • consumer preferences
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