The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

The chart depicts the procedure regarding paper recovery.

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, the process of paper recycling is artificial and consists of 6 different steps. It all starts with the collection of used paper waste and ends up manufactured and usable as if new. Looking at the information more closely, we can see that the first and second steps are the gathering of waste, which is followed by the classification of the residues by hand.

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stage three, the remaining residues are delivered ready to be cleaned and separated from any other material that does not form part of a standard writing sheet which takes part in stage four. After that, in the fifth step, the de-inking process is executed, to remove ink and glue

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going to be converted into sheets in the final operation. The

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operation is

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charged with manufacturing the freshly recycled product.

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Jun 17, 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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152 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling, waste management, sustainability
collection centers, transportation, recycling plant
sorting, separation, grades, types
shredding, pulping, slurry, pulp
screening, de-inking, cleaning, contaminants
refining, bleaching, color stripping, quality
forming, pressing, drying, sheets, reels
quality control, packaging, dispatching
environmental benefits, natural resources conservation
economic benefits, cost savings, job creation
challenges, limitations, process efficiency

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The flow chart below shows the process of waste paper recycling.

In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

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