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Write a letter to a manager whose company is constructing their new office next to your apartment. - Introduce yourself - Describe problems you are facing because of this - Suggest solutions

#manager #company #office #apartment
Dear Sir, I hope you doing well. My name is Preet, living next to your under-constructed office. I am writing
this
 letter to draw your attention to the myriad problems facing by us
due to
 construction.
Firstly
, there is no
such
 space left on the
road
. There is construction material on the
road
, it is hard to cross vehicles,
therefore
 people have to wait and have to pay attention to drive, which increases the chances of an accident.
Moreover
, our neighbour's kid slipped off his bicycle by waste material on the
road
.
Secondly
, Loud noise, your worker is working lately which bothers us in sleeping. To electrify
this
 situation, there is some advice from my side, First of all, you should move that material from the
road
 and put the end of the apartment where we have empty space to use. So that people could get rid of space on the
road
.
However
, I noticed your worker start work at noon so they finished it late. Could your concern with them start early and finish early
.
Change the punctuation
?
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 That's all the concern from my side, I hope you take quick action toward my words. Sincerely, Thanks. Preet,
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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