Nowadays, more and more people choose to do their shopping onlineinstead of going to physical stores. Why is this so? What are the disadvantages of this trend?

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Shopping has been a new trend nowadays which people always want to get new things for themselves
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explored
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new things.Online shopping is the new trend now and people prefer to get into
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online shopping rather than physical stores
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as we know everything has its own advantages and disadvantages I would like to touch on the disadvantages of Online shopping.
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with,One disadvantage of Online shopping is the quality.when the items are found or seen online it looks very quality but when been bought you will realise that it is not of
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online.
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,online items are known or seen to be less expensive as compared to physical stores in the sense that when being purchased online the cost is less but when bought at the stores its very expensive because most of the owners claim that they used transportation means in getting those things into the store's and with that when pricing them they add their transportation funds to them making the cost very high ,
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when it comes to online shopping it is less stressful compared to
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online one sits in his or her comfort zone and just
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what he or she and it will be delivered to that person but with the
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he or she is supposed to take transport to where the items are available before it can be purchased and sometimes the traffic jam alone it's soo annoying In ,
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I would prefer people opt more for online shopping rather than physical shops
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some of these disadvantages l pinpointed
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-commerce
  • convenience
  • physical stores
  • retail therapy
  • consumer behavior
  • digital interactions
  • price comparison
  • product range
  • internet penetration
  • online payment systems
  • delivery logistics
  • carbon footprint
  • expedited shipping
  • local businesses
  • retail sector
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