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The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph presents data from the
year
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 1982 to the
year
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 2010 regarding the ratio of recycled
materials
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 to selected
materials
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.
Overall
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, there are four different
materials
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 that are compared. The
materials
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 are paper and cardboard, glass container, aluminium cans, and plastics. The highest
percentage
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 of the four recycled
materials
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 was paper and cardboard,
while
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 plastics were the lowest
percentage
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.
Furthermore
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, a significant increase in the proportion of recycled aluminium cans can be seen over the period given. The peak of recycling paper was in the
year
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 1990 with 80%. After that, it dropped steadily to reach 70% in the
year
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 2010. Glass container was steadily decreasing in the first eight years, reaching the lowest
percentage
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 in 1990 with 40% proportion.
In addition
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, the recycling of aluminium cans rate was increasingly higher than the other
materials
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.
However
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, there is no significant change regarding recycling plastics, and it is the least component have been recycled with a maximum
percentage
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 that does not exceed 10%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, materials, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Recycled
  • Materials
  • Trends
  • Significant
  • Stability
  • Peak periods
  • Declines
  • Plateaus
  • Growth rates
  • Environmental sustainability
  • Fluctuations
  • Notable
  • Paraphrase
  • Summarize
  • Analyze
  • Comparison
  • Introduction
  • Overview
  • Conclusion
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