The given pie charts compare the varian types of energy power in French families over the course of a decade.
The given pie charts compare the
varian
types of Correct your spelling
various
energy
power in French families over the course of a decade.
It can be seen that the figure witnessed an upward trend in all energy
while
an
opposite was true for Petro. Correct article usage
the
In particular
, coal power dominated the production of energy
over the period
of time and despite the growth in other powers, it was still the minority of categories.
To begin
with, there was
no considerable differences between the percentage in 1995 for coal, gas and Change the verb form
were
petro
, at 29.8%, 29.63%and 29,27%, respectively. Correct your spelling
petrol
In addition
, unidentified energy
types accounted for meager
proportions in the 1995 figure.
Moving on to the second chart, as far as 2005 Change the spelling
meagre
concerned
, Add a missing verb
is concerned
while
nuclear power showed a growing pattern to 10.10%, the proportion of gas was three times higher than nuclear, with 30.31% in turn. Moreover
, coal remained unchanged over the period of time and petro
witnessed a downward trend decreasing to 19.55%.Change the capitalization
Petro
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