The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.

The three pie charts provide information about the percentage of degrees granted in terms of four different professions at the National University over the period in question.
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The charts illustrate the proportion of student's graduated in four different majors in two decades at the National University.
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of people granted remained steady from 1990 to 2010. Computer Science become the only major which graduated increased from 30% in 1990 to 40% in 2010 and grew slowly to 45% in 2010. Degrees granted in Law and Medicine stayed the same between 1990 and 2010. But, there was little change in the
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of students who graduated from Law in 2000. It's dropped 5% from 15% to 10%.
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, the graduate of Medicine rose sharply in 2000 from 25% to 30%. But, it declined to 15% again in 2010. The only major which has fewer alumni over the period is Business. The
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of alumnae fell significantly from 30% in 1990 to 20% in 200.
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, it became only 15% in 2010. In summary, Computer Science has most percentage of degrees granted about half of graduates.
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, Business and Law have the least
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of alumnae.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentages
  • professions
  • industry demands
  • societal trends
  • gender distribution
  • equality
  • persistent gender gaps
  • job market
  • supply and demand
  • employment challenges
  • technological advancements
  • economic conditions
  • policy changes
  • societal shifts
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