Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Other, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.** Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There is an argument about the best measures to

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. some believe that the authorities should consider strict

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for careless

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Others argue that other approaches could be more practical. I think both of these views are partially right. On the one hand, the practicality of punishment in reducing the escalating rate of traffic

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isn't ignorable for a variety of reasons.

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who with their carelessness put other residents on the edge of

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should be taught that their decisions can have consequences

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as deprivation from using their car for some time.

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, I firmly believe if the governments do not discipline these

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, it will not only motivate them to make the same mistake again

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will disappoint other

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who are incredibly careful about complying with rules.

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,

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which are aligned with the severity of these threatening behaviours would result in driving carefully and with more caution and

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accident-prone behaviours.

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, the governors should not shirk their obligations toward providing citizens with safety

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. they should shoulder their responsibilities and take a practical approach to address the high rate of road

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, lights erected

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can lead to fewer mistakes which originate from lack of sight.

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, using both appropriate and adequate signs

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advantageous measure for tackling these issues.

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, it is my belief that except for

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there are numerous ways

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the government can resolve these problems through them. In conclusion, I strictly think both strict

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and other decisions made by the government can be beneficial in decreasing the problem of

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rate of traffic

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