You have just enrolled in a 12 week English class, but have found that you have a family problem and you will have to return home. Write to the school. In your letter 􀁸 Explain what has happened 􀁸 Request a refund 􀁸 Ask whether you will be able to return at a later date

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Anand, I recently enrolled on a 12-week English class at your institute. My registration number is 1255 on the evening batch. I found class is going well and useful for me. But, unfortunately, my dad is met with an accident. He was admitted to the hospital. As the doctor advised, need to take 2 months of bed rest. So, I am planning to return to my city and take care of my dad, until he recovers. Can I get information about the refund policy, when I joined time, the salesperson said that I can get a refund if an unforeseen problem happened.

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will help me a lot. I will be wondering, If a refund is not possible, can you please arrange a reservation after 3 months, with a new batch starting time. I will be looking forward to your reply. Faithfully yours, Anand

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

151 words

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