You have just enrolled in a 12 week English class, but have found that you have a family problem and you will have to return home. Write to the school. In your letter 􀁸 Explain what has happened 􀁸 Request a refund 􀁸 Ask whether you will be able to return at a later date

Dear Sir or Madam My name is Anand, I recently enrolled on a 12-week English class at your institute. My registration number is 1255 on the evening batch. I found class is going well and useful for me. But, unfortunately, my dad is met with an accident. He was admitted to the hospital. As the doctor advised, need to take 2 months of bed rest. So, I am planning to return to my city and take care of my dad, until he recovers. Can I get information about the refund policy, when I joined time, the salesperson said that I can get a refund if an unforeseen problem happened.
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will help me a lot. I will be wondering, If a refund is not possible, can you please arrange a reservation after 3 months, with a new batch starting time. I will be looking forward to your reply. Faithfully yours, Anand
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