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You would like a job working in the summer camp which runs sports and outdoor activities for children and young people. Write a letter to the organisers of the summer camp. In your letter, explain what sort of work you would like to do describe your personality say what relevant experience and skills you have

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Dear Sir, I am writing to recommend a friend of mine whom I think is suitable for the currently vacant position of sports trainer in our summer school. He is one of my closest friends whom I have known for the past ten years, and we were colleagues at my previous job. He had a professional certification for sports training with a long track record of experience in coaching and training young children. He has worked in several well-known International Schools and maintains a good reputation for developing individuals into sporty ones.
Furthermore
, he possesses excellent interpersonal skills and a high level of patience with young people, which are desirable skills for a trainer and useful in identifying the needs and capabilities of each trainee.
In addition
 to the skills required for the job, he is one of the most honest and dedicated people I’ve come across in my career life.
Therefore
, I’d like to suggest him as the right person for the vacant position for your consideration. Best Regards, Myo
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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