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The youth crime rate is rising rapidly in many countries. What are the reasons for this trend? What can parents and teachers do to solve it?

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In recent years, many countries have been experiencing an incredible amount of crimes. Sadly, most of the prosecutors are youngsters. The following essay will discuss
about
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possible causes of
this
 trend and
also
 suggestions to
parents
 and teachers on what they should do to overcome
this
 matter. Originally, people are born
saint
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. Most of the time,
kids
 will learn from what they see and implement it towards their everyday life.
Consequently
, children who are raised in a bad neighbourhood and a lack of parental guidance may be the first cause of youth do crimes.
For example
,
kids
 who are living
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the
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 society full of criminals will learn how to become one of them, because most likely those children do not have an example
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 how to live a good life.
Besides
 that, the government should take
this
 issue seriously with proper punishments. Justice needs to be served no matter how little the crimes they have committed. The second possible cause will be a lack of society’s norms
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 in schools nowadays. Most
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schools
are
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only care about the academic achievement and reputation of the school itself. Good grades
of
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 school will only
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 academically.
Kids
also
 will be complemented by their
parents
 if they achieved excellent academic grades, rather than acting nicely or politely. The third is the effect of social
media
 consumption. With the advancement of technologies these days, social
media
 has emerged. Plenty of people can search for anything through social
media
,
not to mention
 criminal activities. Not only social
media
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 but
also
 movies. As I mentioned above,
kids
 will recall any actions they have seen and
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it
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 their lives.
To conclude
,
parents
 and teachers should seriously begin to tackle
this
 issue by being more involved in youngsters’ everyday life.
Parents
 need to control and oversee their children’s activity in order to avoid any
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 income. Teachers, or schools in general, should add
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 curriculum that teaches
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instead
 of only academic
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.
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