The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income in five European countries that spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income in five European countries that spend on food and drink, housing, clothing, and entertainment.
The table shows what
proportion
of
income
in five
countries
in Europe is spent on different purposes, namely
food
and
drink
, housing, clothing, and
entertainment
. In France, there is a noticeable difference between housing and
food
and
drink
on the one hand, and clothing and
entertainment
on the other. housing ranks first with 31%,
while
food
and
drink
is 25%.
Entertainment
contributes 13% and closing was about half of it by 7%. In Germany,
people
spend roughly 1/3 of their
income
on housing.
Food
and
drink
represent 22%,
While
entertainment
is Few
percent
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the smaller( 19%). Clothing has
least
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proportion
by 15% .
People
in the UK
also
spend more
proportion
on housing, about 35%,
while
the
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food
and
drink
is
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10% lower. Clothing and
entertainment
have
a
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same figure( 11%). Turkish
people
spend 36% of their
income
on
food
and
drink
and clothing is 1.3 as high. Housing shares 20% which is twice as high as
entertainment
. In Spain,
people
spend 31% on
food
and
drink
, ranking
first,
followed by housing with 18%.
Entertainment
ranks
third,
and
least
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proportion
is for clothing, 13 and 8%, respectively.
Overall
, the most
proportion
of monthly
income
in the three
countries
is spent on housing,
while
food
and
drink
rank first in the two remaining
countries
. clothing is the least
proportion
in all
countries
, except Turkey,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words proportion, income, countries, food, drink, entertainment, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "proportion" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Proportion
  • Household income
  • Allocate
  • Basic necessities
  • Expenditures
  • Essentials
  • Economy
  • Living conditions
  • Standard of living
  • Cultural significance
  • Leisure activities
  • Financial prioritization
  • Noticeable trends
  • Unusual allocations
  • Society's values
  • Economic status
  • Illustrates
  • Highlights
  • Comparison
  • Analyze
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