The pie graphs below show the result of a survey children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.

The pie graphs below show the result of a survey children’s activities. The first graph shows the cultural and leisure activities that boys participate in, whereas the second graph shows the activities in which the girls participate.
The given pie charts illustrate the report of a survey of juveniles’ leisure activities. The first graph depicts the lifestyle and free-time boys are involved in,
while
the other shows that those are the girls' participation.
Overall
, during their spare time, computer games are the most favourite activities for young males,
whereas
reading is the least one.
Otherwise
, young females mostly spend their day dancing and reading hours in leisure.
To begin
with, there is around 35% of boys' time used playing computer games, followed by sports exercises, yet playing basketball is a higher proportion than soccer, comprising 26% and 17%.
Moreover
, Skateboarding and Listening to Music have slightly similar percentages, accounting for 11% and 10% respectively. Reading is the less favourite activity for boys, which is merely 2%. Turning to the girls’ data, reading hours are liked for young females, about 21%, which is lower than Dancing by 27% as the highest rate among hobbies. Computer games are preferable to Gymnastics, approximately 16% and 11% respectively.
Conversely
, listening to music is the least ratio, which is 10%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • participate
  • cultural activities
  • leisure activities
  • pie graphs
  • survey
  • boys
  • girls
  • comparison
  • participation
  • overall
  • similarities
  • differences
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