Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam. How true do you think this statement is ? What measure can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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helps mobility for some
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, especially in urban areas. It will be easier too to work with a
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than with public
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because we can start driving from home to the office without jumping into another kind of
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. Not only that, we can freely decide the destination from where we are. In my opinion, it is true that
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ownership has increased over the past thirty years. Not only that, but the type of
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varying. Now, electric
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used in several countries.
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can help to reduce the pollution. But, pollution is not the only problem in urban areas. Because everyone wants to mobilize in a
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, it shaped a big traffic jam. Both standard and electric
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will be stuck in the street because of
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. In order to solve the traffic jam issue, the government should take real action. The first thing to do is to develop public
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facility. As we know, one of the reasons
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use
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is because of the comfort. The government should make public
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as comfortable as their own
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. If public
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facilities has increased in numbers and
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developed comforts,
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wouldn't think twice to use them. The cost of public transformation
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needs to be reduced. As it is a public facility, it should help the
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in the city to mobilize easily in comfort without a heavy cost. By using public
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pollution and traffic jam.
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will reduce the number of
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owners.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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