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Internet crime is increasing rapidly as more and more people are using the internet to make financial transactions. What can be done to tackle this problem?

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Nowadays, as technology growing rapidly and influence the development of
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internet
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 for online
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. Making
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 crime is increasing extremely as more and more
people
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use
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 to make financial transactions. I will shed some light on what can be done to tackle
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People
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 nowadays
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 the development of
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internet
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 not only for searching for something they do not know, but today they can
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 it to make
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transaction
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transactions
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, especially online
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transaction
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. That way is more beneficial to many users
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 its efficiency particularly in saving up energy and not time consuming. The more benefits they get, the bigger their drawbacks too.
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 is cybercrime.
People
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, particularly elderly
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 often have less self-awareness compared to young
people
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 making it easier to be fooled
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 as hacking their phones. Often times when doing the online
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, they are likely to be clueless about what they are doing,
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 they may sharing their OTP code with a stranger, fill up their full identity on a
website
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 which is not secure, and
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 not
use
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password
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a password
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 for important apps like mobile banking. There are numerous ways to tackle
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 problem, these tips are not only shown for elderly
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 but
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 for adults
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 and young children.
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, we have to be aware of giving our identity on a
website
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 especially when about to do online
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transaction
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transactions
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. One clear example is we must already know the
website
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 is not secure if they tend to tell us to upload or fill up excessive data like the pin or
password
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 of our bank card.
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, we have to double up our security account,
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 we have to change our
password
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 routinely or we can make it two verification every time we log in to our account. In conclusion, there are many ways for the swindler to do a cyber crime especially when it comes to online transactions. So, we must keep up our self-awareness in order to not get those crimes. Several ways we can do
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, we can check whether it is a secure
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 or not, and we must routinely change our
password
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 or make two verification every time we are about to log in to our account.
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