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An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers are leaving their poor countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to overcome this problem?

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It is true that in developing
countries
, in order to work, many health care providers and educational mentors are urging
to
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the
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another
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countries
 with stable
economy
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. From my point of view, there are several reasons behind
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this
 and in
this
 essay, I will discuss
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reasonable problems and their solutions. 
To begin
 with, steady income is the biggest advantage to move
another
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 country. Nowadays it is crystal clear that there is a huge difference
of
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 salary between
poor
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 and developed
country
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countries
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, to be exact,
average
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the average
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 salary of
residential
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 doctor in Mongolia is approximately 250$ in a month,
on the other hand
, in the USA it is started around 5000$.
Moreover
, there is
also
 another big advantage in developed
countries
 which is they have the latest technological
equipments
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equipment
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,
for
instance
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 computer tomography for diagnosis, robotic surgery tools, electronic boards and so on.
In addition
, in underdeveloped
countries
, many students study together in
average
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 public school which is more than fifty students in one class.
As a consequence
, professionals
such
 as
,
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 teachers and tutors are experiencing
burn-out
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 syndrome in their workplace. To tackle
this
 issue, the government should do some changes with certain stages. First of all, they need to support their skilled workforce
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financially
otherwise
 loss of professionals can be
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 economic drawback to that country. In
the
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second place, the government can make a law about work
contract
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contracts
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, to be specific, these
professionalists
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 have to work
at
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 least 3 to 5 years in their own nation shortly after graduation.
Lastly
, they need a fund which supports scholarships for students who want to be
doctor
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doctors
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 or
teacher
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teachers
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. It will help
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workforce
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the workforce
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 of
these profession
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. In conclusion, there is no doubt that many nations are facing with loss of skilled people
to
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 developed
countries
 and
as a result
, it will be hard to manage
medical
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 and educational
field
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 without good experts.
For
this
 reason, the government need to take
actions
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 immediately in order to keep them.
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