The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The map illustrates how a certain university sports ground has changed since 1990.

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, more facilities were created in the area throughout the 10-year period and now the majority of them are located indoors,

in contrast

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to 1990.

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, previous amenities directly related to sports are not replaced, but now they occupy a larger area than before. A closer look allows us to notice that in 1990 the sports facilities comprised a pool, a cafe, a reception, a changing room and two tennis courts.

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, opposite the amenities, there was a park and a car parking. Nowadays, the park,

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the car parking, are not there anymore.

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, they are replaced with basketball and tennis courts, which in turn are relocated and their number doubled.

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, the pool, the cafe and the reception remain intact in the new indoor area,

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, the changing room is moved a bit to the right and is now more spacious.

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, in the space occupied before by two tennis courts, now there is a big fitness centre, right next to the changing room.

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