Internet is an important part of our lives and we cannot imagine our job or studies without it. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

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a significant role in our lives, and it is impossible to
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our life without it. There are many merits including,
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us to communicate and
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physical and mental issues. On the one hand, there are several drawbacks
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encourage
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people
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to adopt
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lifestyle.
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nowadays, spend a considerable
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rather than doing exercise, which
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rate of obesity among
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individuals feel isolated and
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prefer to interact through social media
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rather than face-to-face interaction, which
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can
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to increase mental health issues namely, depression,
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various benefits of
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. The first advantage, the
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gives
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access to a wide range of
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in different
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regardless of their geographical
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can use Google to search
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plenty of
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from their comfort
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. The second advantage, the
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helps us to keep in touch with loved ones regardless of their geographical
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can
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relationships in
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. To illustrate,
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who study or work abroad can make
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family or friends, which
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can reduce the
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. In conclusion, the
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have have upsides namely, gives
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accessa
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access
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people
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to stay in touch with their families,
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, the downsides of
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internet
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including, motivate
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to adopt
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lifestyle,
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people
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struggle with mental health problems.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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