Some people argue that space exploration has had more to do with national pride than international effort. To what extent do you agree with this? How do you think space exploration will change in the future?
In the modern
world
, space
exploration
is not a strange phenomenon, and people are uncovering more and more interesting things occurring around us. However
, its rapid growth in our community raises a contradictory question for both the government and citizens of whether the objective of space
research
is to contribute to a specific country
or to the sake of the whole world
. From my perspective, every individual's and country
's prosperity has at least some international contribution and in this
essay, I will discuss the reasons, with a few examples as attached, why I think so.
To begin
with, while
national pride is vital, when we work collaboratively with other countries to conduct research
on a vast issue, we may build a desirable outcome that meets our definitions of success faster and with a higher level of efficacy. In addition
, an efficient platform for work collaboration also
helps save costs, which means that governments can use that money to address some other necessary problems such
as environmental pollution or poverty. For example
, rich countries will support matters related to finance, machinery, equipment, and spacecraft and the rest can focus on research
and development projects. Therefore
, smart collaboration among individuals all around the world
can have a significant influence on space
exploration
, making sure they’re on the right track. Because of the world
's fast progress, research
and development in space
areas are getting increasingly easier. “That's one small step for man, one giant leap for mankind”-goes the saying of Neil Armstrong, who was the first human to land on the moon. Through that quote, I believe that every single success of any individual as well as
their country
at least contributes to the international effort. In fact, the use of robots to replace humans to go into space
is gradually becoming more prevalent, which facilitates space
tourism as a potentially popular activity in the future. In brief, space
exploration
has changed a lot in the past and is expected to continue to change in the future, giving more people the opportunity to experience space
.
On the other hand
, it is no doubt that successful space
exploration
mostly brings various achievements as well as
compliments to a particular country
. And that would be easily understood mainly because of the great efforts that a nation puts into space
projects. It is their own scientific research
, their time spent through years to years to higher to the ratio of gains and lower the possibility of losses. In contrast
, if the launch is not fully accomplished with an unexpected problem during the process, the astronauts of that country
may sacrifice their lives and the state as well as
the related organizations will have to take all the responsibility for this
substantial and emotional damage.
In conclusion, although
there are reasons why every nation can be proud of themselves when it comes to certain space
achievements, international cooperation should always be required to accomplish substantial results in space
exploration
. Hence
, in order to create significant highlights for future space
research
, we should ignore national boundaries and work together for a shared goal as the development in researching space
will be widely extended promptly, opening up numerous prospects for universe exploration
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