Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell: what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have.

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Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to draw your immediate attention to a significant requirement which is required in the office. Let me explain my situation, there is very less room for all the staff members in the cafeteria. Many employees are having their

lunch

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standing in the

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room and I heard many times from the staff about their inconvenience and dissatisfaction but nobody is ready to talk about

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problem with the management. They try to run through the cafeteria before others to find a seat there. I

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consider that staff members' concern about less space in the

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room is genuine because I

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faced the problem many times and

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really hurts when after working we are unable to sit and have our

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peacefully. I am writing to you on behalf of all the employees and want you to consider

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problem and find a solution to it. I have a suggestion if you don't mind, the empty area near the entrance door of the office can be used to build another cafeteria so that there will be no rush at one place. I hope you will address

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concern as soon as possible. Yours Sincerely, Sonia Saini

sainisonia422Tue Jun 20 2023

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

205 words

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Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staff. In your letter, you should tell: what you heard about the inconvenience from the staff how you feel about it what suggestions you have.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

some experts believe for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.Do the advantages of learning a foreign language at an early age outweigh the disadvantages?

Many young people leave their own countries to work abroad. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working abroad and give your own opinion

Your photograph recently won a photography competition and will be shown in an exhibition. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •describe the photograph you sent to the competition •tell him/her about the exhibition where your photo will be shown •invite him/her to the exhibition

The number of students studying science at university is constantly declining. What do you think are the causes? What effects will this have on our society?