The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram presents the process of wasted
glass
bottle recycling.
Overall
, there are 3 stages of
this
procedure. The
glass
bottles
are categorized by their colours. The finished
glass
bottle products in the supermarket have both new and recycled
glass
bottles
on the shelves. In the first
stage
, the wasted
glass
bottles
are sent to the collection point where these wasted
glass
bottles
are picked up by truck. After the
glass
bottles
are picked up from the collection point, they are sent to the factory for the next
stage
.
Next,
the second
stage
starts with washing the
glass
bottles
with high-pressure water.
Then
, they are classified into 3 types by their colours: brown, green, and transparent. After that, the
glass
factory breaks these cleaned
bottles
into pieces.
Then
, they are burnt in the furnace at 600 to 800 Celsius.
Then
, the recycled liquid
glass
is shaped in the mould
as well as
the new liquid
glass
. In the third
stage
, the recycled
glass
bottles
and new
glass
bottles
are finished. They are filled with water and ready for sale in the supermarket eventually.
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