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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram presents the process of wasted
glass
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 bottle recycling.
Overall
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, there are 3 stages of
this
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 procedure. The
glass
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bottles
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 are categorized by their colours. The finished
glass
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 bottle products in the supermarket have both new and recycled
glass
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bottles
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 on the shelves. In the first
stage
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, the wasted
glass
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bottles
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 are sent to the collection point where these wasted
glass
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bottles
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 are picked up by truck. After the
glass
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bottles
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 are picked up from the collection point, they are sent to the factory for the next
stage
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.
Next,
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the second
stage
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 starts with washing the
glass
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bottles
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 with high-pressure water.
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, they are classified into 3 types by their colours: brown, green, and transparent. After that, the
glass
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 factory breaks these cleaned
bottles
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 into pieces.
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, they are burnt in the furnace at 600 to 800 Celsius.
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, the recycled liquid
glass
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 is shaped in the mould
as well as
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 the new liquid
glass
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. In the third
stage
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, the recycled
glass
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bottles
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 and new
glass
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bottles
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 are finished. They are filled with water and ready for sale in the supermarket eventually.
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