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The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarize the informations by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram presents the process of wasted
glass
 bottle recycling.
Overall
, there are 3 stages of
this
 procedure. The
glass
bottles
 are categorized by their colours. The finished
glass
 bottle products in the supermarket have both new and recycled
glass
bottles
 on the shelves. In the first
stage
, the wasted
glass
bottles
 are sent to the collection point where these wasted
glass
bottles
 are picked up by truck. After the
glass
bottles
 are picked up from the collection point, they are sent to the factory for the next
stage
.
Next,
the second
stage
 starts with washing the
glass
bottles
 with high-pressure water.
Then
, they are classified into 3 types by their colours: brown, green, and transparent. After that, the
glass
 factory breaks these cleaned
bottles
 into pieces.
Then
, they are burnt in the furnace at 600 to 800 Celsius.
Then
, the recycled liquid
glass
 is shaped in the mould
as well as
 the new liquid
glass
. In the third
stage
, the recycled
glass
bottles
 and new
glass
bottles
 are finished. They are filled with water and ready for sale in the supermarket eventually.
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