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In some countries, marriages are arranged by the parents but in other cases, people choose their own marriage partner. Discuss both systems and state one do you think is better?

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It has always been argued that in some parts of the nation,
parents
 arrange marriage for their
children
,
whereas
children
is
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 allowed to be their partners. In my opinion, I favour the latter perspective;
however
,
this
 essay shall dwell on both viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs. On the one hand,
parents
 are more experienced and know what is best for their
children
, but sometimes they take decisions under pressure from their society, so it puts an adverse impact on
people
's
life
such
 as divorce.
For instance
, a survey conducted by Harward University revealed that in India 55% of marriages by the decision of their
parents
 without suggestions of their offspring, especially in the rural part of
this
 nation.
On the other hand
, love marriages are the
one
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 where
people
 have the freedom to choose their partner that thing is more eminent among Western cultures as individuals know the qualities of their counterparts and know from long times each other with the assistance of
this
 they might live their
life
 happier than arrange marriage.
For example
, an article published by The Tribune newspaper showed that almost 85% of
people
 have satisfied
from
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 their
life
 because they choose their own marriage partner and they have more understanding.
Due to
 the above-mentioned, I favour the same.
To conclude
,
although
parents
 have already experienced
the
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hardship in their
life
,
therefore
 they have the ability to have the right decision, I personally believe that
parents
 should allow
to
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their
children
 they can choose their
partners'
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partners
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people
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and people
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 they are in love with.
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