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You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#work #manager #people #attitude #expectations #office #addresses #sir #madam
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that I am not feeling comfortable at the office for the
last
 few days as one of our colleagues always roams around me to sell his product as he is working as
seller
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a seller
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also
.His behaviour not only affects me but
also
 other employees as it distracts the people and they cannot focus on their
work
. As I am working in a multinational company,I expect a peaceful working environment.It is the responsibility of managers to assure the proper environment for
work
 so that
work
 can be done properly.With
this
 unprofessional behaviour,I do not think that I can
work
 with proper dedication. So, I would really appreciate it if the high authorities encourage the employees to maintain a good environment.
Also
,communications should be based only on workplace queries.Employees should keep their private businesses outside the office. Hope to get a positive review from your side. Yours faithfully, Kiran
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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