You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

#work #manager #people #attitude #expectations #office #addresses #sir #madam

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter to inform you that I am not feeling comfortable at the office for the

last

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few days as one of our colleagues always roams around me to sell his product as he is working as

seller

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a seller

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also

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.His behaviour not only affects me but

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other employees as it distracts the people and they cannot focus on their

work

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. As I am working in a multinational company,I expect a peaceful working environment.It is the responsibility of managers to assure the proper environment for

work

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so that

work

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can be done properly.With

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unprofessional behaviour,I do not think that I can

work

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with proper dedication. So, I would really appreciate it if the high authorities encourage the employees to maintain a good environment.

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,communications should be based only on workplace queries.Employees should keep their private businesses outside the office. Hope to get a positive review from your side. Yours faithfully, Kiran

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

157 words

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