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More and more people want to buy clothes,cars and other items with famous brands. -What are the reasons? -Is that a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many
people
 are spending amount of money purchasing fashionable items like clothes, bags, cars and others
in
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with
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brand
name
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names
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. In the following paragraphs,
this
 view will be discussed in detail before the conclusion is reached.
To begin
 with, it is undeniable that most
people
, especially
teenager
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teenagers
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 and
adult
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adults
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, tend to buy more
brand name
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brand-name
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 products
such
 as Channel, Gucci, Prada or Hermes. One of the major
reason
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reasons
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 is
a
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pressure
 from society, called
a
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peer
pressure
. To illustrate, when
people
 see their friends have
a
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new clothes or new bags from some famous brands, it is true to say that they might want to buy those clothes as their friends.
Additionally
, the
pressure
 is not only caused
from
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by
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 peers
,
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 but
also
social
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by social
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 media.
For instance
, these days, many
people
 spend time
on
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surfing the internet like Tiktok,
instagram
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Instagram
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 and
facebook
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Facebook
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, more than 60% of these
people
 have a
favorite
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favourite
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 person
who
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whom
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 they are following, leading to loving their styles.
As a result
, those
people
 will purchase famous
brand
 products same as the influencers they like.
According to
 the statement, from my point of view, there are both pros and cons in the development of buying popular brands. The first positive thing is that
brand name
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brand-name
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 products have a
long-lifetime
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long lifetime
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,
it
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they
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 can be used
in
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for
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 many years.
Next,
the designs are unique and no one can
copy
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themcopy
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.
On the contrary
,
sometime
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sometimes
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 it is unnecessary items, costing
to
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too
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 much money. In order to buy
those product
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that product
those products
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, some individuals must spend their whole
month
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month's
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 salary
for
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on
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 purchasing. To summarize, more and more individuals
trend
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tend
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 to buy famous brands because
the
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of the
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pressure
, caused
from
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by
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 their society.
However
, there
are
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 both positive and negative development, for me the drawbacks outweigh the benefits.
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