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The typical teaching situation of the teacher and students in the class will not exist by the year 2050. Do you agree/ disagree with this opinion?

#situation #teacher #students #class #year
Nowadays, the typical teaching method
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 no longer related to the present
student
 condition and problem. The teachers will slowly leave the traditional way and make a comprehensive change in 2050. I strongly agree and will explain the reason
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further
. As we know, the teacher used to
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 all of the
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 into one room. The number of the
student
 is
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 the range
10
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-30 people in one class. Taught by only a teacher, all of the
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 are given the same treatment.
However
, they will not get the same result from each individual because of their different condition. Those who have a high enthusiasm for learning will get
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examination
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 rather than the ones who are not interested at all. It will be the biggest challenge for the teachers if they wouldn't improve their teaching method.
Moreover
,
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the presence of
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technology and instant entertainment make the
student
 attention are easily get distracted and zoned out. For these reasons, The teachers will completely leave the old way which
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 longer relatable. They will make different psychological
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 for each of
individuals
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the individuals
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 before start learning
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 make an adjustment based on
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 interest and ability to process the information. Technology
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also
 the main media for teaching, so it will
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 attractive and the information will be given thoroughly and evenly. In conclusion, I agree that the traditional teaching method will slowly
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 behind and completely
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 by new and more advance in 2050.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • technology advancements
  • virtual learning
  • online education
  • individualized learning
  • personalized learning
  • facilitative role
  • collaborative learning
  • evolve
  • adapt
  • social interaction
  • communication skills
  • teacher-student relationships
  • flexible learning
  • lifelong learning
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