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Some people believe teenagers should follow the examples of older people, others believe it is natural for teenagers to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give ypur opinion.

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While
 some argue that teenagers should take examples from older
people
, others think
that is
 better for the young
generation
 to have their own way of thinking.
People
 who learn from others'
mistake
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, can make progress faster and safer but sometimes, new
ideas
 create a better world which has a great contribution to
society
.
This
 essay will elaborate on both
ideas
 and a personal conclusion. On the one hand, the elderly
generation
 has a huge experience with the meaning of
life
, and they can provide priceless
advice
 about what does it really matter in
life
.
For example
, many grandparents conclude over decades of
life
, that
life
 has basic principles which help humans to have a happier
life
, or sometimes it supports them, to pass easier through difficult moments. Every time, ageing
people
 learn new generations ,to be honest, friendly,
to
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 have faith because, these are essential
thinks
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things
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 which really matter throughout
the
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apply
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life
. These
advices
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advice
pieces of advice
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, definitely help modern
society
, who do not have enough
life
 experience, to scrape through awful events.
On the other hand
, young adults who live
life
 just through
advice
 provided by the previous
generation
, risk creating a monotonous
society
. Youth
society
 should be encouraged to develop their own
ideas
,
to
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and to
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 adopt new concepts of thinking because all brilliant
ideas
 were developed by thinking
out
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 of
box
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. For ,example Bill Gates who developed Windows, definitely changed our way of living. Nowadays, almost everything can be done easier with a computer, from travelling
,
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 to construction, and
this
 was happening because a young man with huge ambition was encouraged to think and develop his idea. In conclusion, the new
generation
 should follow the
advice
 of elderly
people
 because during a lifetime are unpleasant moments which can be passed easier with
advice
 from others' experiences, but at the same time new
ideas
 must be encouraged because
this
 means evolution which makes our
life
 easier.
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