The charts show information about percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970-2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The charts show information about percentage of men and women aged 60-64 who were employed in four countries in 1970-2000. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The two given bar charts illustrate the comparison between men and women aged 60-64 who worked in four countries (Belgium, USA, Japan and Indonesia) in the years 1970 and 2000. Units are measured in percentage.
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, it can clearly be seen that the number of workers had a downtrend. In terms of the men worker, the USA and Indonesia which had almost the same number of men at about 85% at the beginning of the period experienced a slight decrease to precisely 78% and 71%, respectively.
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, Belgium and Japan which stood at the range of 75%-78% dropped significantly to just a little bit over 50% after 30 years. Regarding women employees in 1970, the USA was in the first position at under 80% and went down drastically to exactly 41%.
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, Indonesia and Japan started at 65% and 55% but they decreased to around 59% and 60%. Interestingly, Belgium which began with 62%, witnessed a drastic drop to just 8%.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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