Students are becoming more and more reliant on the Internet. While the Internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement?

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this
AI (artificial intelligence) era,
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is becoming essential for everyone
whereas
, from young to old, or either child or
student
, from
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business
to
eductaion
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education
and so on.
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, there is no doubt to say that, humans are totally
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on
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internet
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.
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, these days
students
are taking more
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of
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internet
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for their study and depending on
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internet
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so far which
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lots of negative impact on them, I am in
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favour
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some
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on it. First of all,
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internet
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makes people easy
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and
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shortcut to solve any problem. It is the easiest way to get rid of any
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hurdle
hurdles
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a
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seconds. It is convenient
that is
one of the main
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people are very
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it.
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,
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easiest way makes
student
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students
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lean on it.
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use
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for
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get
any
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answers without using their own
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or without taking
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practically. To
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, Chat GPT,
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is one of
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advance
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on
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that attract
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attension
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attention
.
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,
students
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it to get
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from
this
platform by just pressing some clicks.
However
, by doing nothing they are getting their score which makes them graduate without knowledge.
Furthermore
,
internet
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restrict
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the mind from
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or from other work as well. Youngster
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to do
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internet
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which
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their
time
by doing nothing.
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spending
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more
time
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giving
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less
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anything else.
However
, in the
time
of covid, when everything was
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settled
on
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.
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takes more
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of
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by searching from
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and just
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it online to examiners.
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time
nobody was prepared for that and
students
had
less
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chances
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cought
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caught
. Examiners had to take
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their
final exams on
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which
make
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students
more rely on
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. To summarize,
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has
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bad
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negative impact on
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system
for
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any place in
this
world. There should be
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restriction
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for
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internet
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.
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should be allowed for limited content. There should be not all
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material available on
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or there should be some
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or identification for
person
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to
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it
therefore
not anybody can
use
it for their own
use
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • independent learning
  • critical thinking
  • excessive reliance
  • hinder
  • crucial
  • problem-solving
  • overly dependent
  • diversity
  • perspectives
  • global cultures
  • enriching
  • unrestricted
  • information overload
  • discerning
  • credible sources
  • incorporation
  • engagement
  • adaptivity
  • personalized learning
  • innovative
  • pedagogy
  • digital age
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