The graph shows the percentage of tourists to Scotland, who visited four different attractions in Edinburgh from 1980 to 2010
The line graph illustrates the
proportion
of visitors travelling to four places of interest in Edinburgh between 1980 and 2010.
Generally, the percentage of travellers to the Use synonyms
castle
was the highest throughout the Use synonyms
years
. Use synonyms
While
the zoo and Linking Words
castle
witnessed an upward tendency in their Use synonyms
proportion
of visitors, the figures for those of the aquarium and festival decreased noticeably.
In 1980, the zoo was the least attractive destination. It took up only 10% of visitors. within the next 20 Use synonyms
years
, the Use synonyms
proportion
of that fluctuated continuously and Use synonyms
then
increased to 20% in 2010. Linking Words
Likewise
, Linking Words
castle
visiting stood at about 20% in the first year of the observed period. After reaching its peak of 45% in 1995, the figure for people coming to Use synonyms
Castle
dropped significantly to nearly 35% in 2010. Use synonyms
However
, it's still remained the best tourist attraction in Scotland.
Linking Words
By contrast
, the festivals made up the largest percentage of tourists in 1980, at 30%. Linking Words
However
, the figure for that kept decreasing within the following 30 Linking Words
years
and ended up at 20% in 2010. The aquarium, which stood at 20% of travellers in 1980, reached a peak of 35% over the next five Use synonyms
years
. The Use synonyms
proportion
of that Use synonyms
then
saw a dramatic decline two about only 10%, which made it the least popular destination in 2010.Linking Words
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