The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distributed.

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the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one

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the national government had the highest percentage and other sources (eg grants)had the lowest percentage,the

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in salaries (officers and staff)rate peaked and the technology it was

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higher in salaries (officers and staff) at approximately 75% of spent money in 2017

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in 2018 slightly lower at around 69%,In 2017and 2018 rate remind stable at just over 17% for buildings and transport, With

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of police budget the National government reached a peak of about around at 175.5m in 2017 and after one

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177.8m ,after that gradually increased

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local taxes from

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approximately 91.2 in 2017 to 102.3m of

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other sources (eg grant) still kept on same low figures just over at 38m ,in

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was 304.7m in at2017 and

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