You have recently missed a project deadline which resulted in your company losing an important client. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter • apologies for what happened • explain why you missed the deadline • tell him/her how you will avoid this situation in future.

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to you that
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apologies
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for the biggest
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of our company
due to
my ignorance we
losing
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an
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crucial client when
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heard about it I really feel so bad
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this
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am ready to pay my pantry . Actually, when
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worked on
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was
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working on our new project
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from my team one employee went
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sick leave .
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whole work burden came on me and
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was very upset
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did not
managed
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whole
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work properly that's why
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missed our project deadline and lose the client.
Furthermore
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will never repeat again
this
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will do my whole focus on my work
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with my deepest regret
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apologies
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to you . I hope
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will never
disappointed
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you again. I look forward to hearing from you,
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Faithfully, Kamaldeep
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