The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.

The bar chart provides information about how families in a country spent weekly income in both 1968 and in 2018.
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The bar chart below depicts, over 50 years, the several activities that families spent during their week. From an
overall
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perspective, the statistics start from the year 1968 to end up with the period time of 2018.
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, as has been already mentioned, the activities taken into consideration are many, or rather 8, namely Food, Housing, Fuel and Power, Clothing and footwear, Household goods, Personal goods, Transports and Leisure.
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with, the first case is related to food, which reaches a percentage of 35% in the year 1968 and 18% over the years. Following the activity of housing, the fractions are both under 20%, or rather 10% and 19%. The equal situation is for Fuel and Power, Clothing, Household and Personal, which fees are lower than 10%.
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the transport case illustrates, for the first year, the result of 8%,
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14% for 2018. In the
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case, which is Leisure, its proportions are one less than 10%(9%) and the other up 20% (22%).
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, with what has already been analysed, it's relevant to highlight that over the years a variety of activities, have been taken different processes.
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