The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket.
The map illustrates, the new possible plan for a supermarket (s) in the town of Garlsdon.
Overall
, the town is surrounded by 3 main villages and placement of the first supermarket is in a rural area while
the second one is in the city center
.
Change the spelling
centre
Firstly
, the population of Grasdon is 65,0000. The Hindon village
is the least populated one, it has just 10,0000, however
, it is closer to the town than any other village
(12km). Moreover
, Hindon is the nearest village
to the S1. This
place is connected to the industry by main roads and it has a railway that goes through S2 and to Crandson.
Secondly
, Brandson is the second biggest village
, it is 15,000 people and it is slightly further
than HIndon (16 km). Same as the previous place it has main roads to the industry, but in comparison to the other two villages does not have a railway. Cransdon is the most distant one (25 km) with 29,000 people. Near these two villages is housing on the north.Submitted by maat2074 on
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