The table above shows the percentage of students who attended four different high schools in the years 2000, 2005 and 2009.
The table above shows the
percentage
of students who attended four different high schools
in the years 2000, 2005 and 2009.
It is evident that whereas
the community schools
experienced a marked increase in the proportion of those attending their institutions over the period, the others saw a corresponding decline.
Percentage
Specialist School
attendance
in 2000 was 12%, then
gradually decreased to 11% in 2005 and finally
10% in 2009. Grammar Schools
has a much higher percentage
of attendance
than Specialist School
at 24%. doubled, but that percentage
also
gradually decreased year by year to 19% in 2005 and finally
stopped at 10% in 2009.
At Voluntary School
, student Fix the agreement mistake
Schools
attendance
in 2000 was only 52%, then
dropped sharply in the following years to only 38% in 2005 and 20% in 2009. And at Community School
attendance
in 2000 was also
the lowest at only 38%. about 12% equal to Specialist School
then
has a rapid growth of 32% in 2005, to 2009 is the highest 58% of all schools
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