“In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?”

Nowadays, some new buildings are needed for residents expanding to the
countryside
and some people think we should protect that rural area rather than building new homes there. In my opinion, how we combine to have the new homes and still keep the urban landscape and protect public
health
. The number of citizens has been increasing every day so the heavy traffic and overpopulation are a burden for our government.
Therefore
they need to consider carefully and have building plans in the
countryside
. They need to check seriously the construction area if
this
urbanisation were built without harming the natural
environment
and maybe using these green landscapes for new buildings.
For example
, Aqua City of Novaland Group is a project with many trees and the nearby Dong Nai River. The residents can live and enjoy the fresh air and beautiful landscape.
Moreover
, people are towards
health
because the rate of mental and physical illness is increasing rather than before, so the eco-life is a trend today. Some eco-districts are improving the living
environment
and
health
.
Therefore
, the
countryside
is advantageous to build
this
model, the government could use the existing green spaces to protect and improve the citizen
health
.
For example
, some developing countries have housing policies that show over 35% of green space in building new homes is required. In inclusion, in my opinion, some new buildings in the
countryside
are needed but we should consider saving the green and natural
environment
and
this
helps us have a good living
environment
in great public
health
besides
nature.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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