‘Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behaviour is now having a negative impact on society.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

These days, it is undeniable that many children have had

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worse

behavior

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, especially

to

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toward

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their

parents

, compared to the

part

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past

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and it

also

effects

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affects

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to

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a

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society. From my point of view,

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impact causes many negative

affects

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. Most young people nowadays do not respect their

parents

,

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of the major reasons is that they had imitated

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bad

behavior

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from adults. To illustrates, when their

parents

fight

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each other or have an argument, they will copy those words and manners in order to imitate. The reason is

because

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they

was

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taught to

listen

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their fathers and mothers, so they believe

that is

a great

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to follow.

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, the bad

behaviors

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from their

parents

can lead them to be an introvert.

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, some juveniles would

be shock

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and stunned when they see people in their family having a fight,

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them to stay

in

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apply

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silent or some kids choose to cry. Moving to

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another reasons

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another reason

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that

effects

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adolescents

to

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have a negative impact on society

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is social media.

Todays

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, many children tend to spend more time

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watching cartoons and playing games, leading to

they

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them

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learn

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learning

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how to behave from the cartoon’s characters.

For instance

, some characters have bad manners

such

as a thief and a

murder

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, they might not know what is good or bad

then

they decide to imitate those characters because of their

favorites

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. To summarize, it can be emphasized that

parents

are an example for all juveniles and they need to be a good imitation

for

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of

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them.

Furthermore

, the negative

behaviors

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behaviours

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also

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caused

from

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by

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social media, leading to their

parents

should provide some

advises

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while

they are watching.